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She's a puppet with
wide yellow eyes that never
seem to shine.

She's a puppet with a painted red smile
that never looks meaningful.

She's a puppet with a body that
would make anorexics jealous.

She's a puppet with strings
being yanked in different directions by
lustful men.

She's a puppet whose body is marked
in bruises and scars inflicted by men who think
she's beautiful when she's in pain.

She's a puppet who finally decided
she will not be a toy stacked in the back of shelves
waiting to be used again.

She's a puppet who is standing on the roof of a building
and she jumps.
©2009 ~loverz116
:iconloverz116:

Author's Comments

Well, i don't like the ending. maybe it could have been a better ending but overall i think i like this poem.

hope y'all like it as well.

:heart:

P.S. my title sucks. i suck at making titles.

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

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:iconshadowgriffen:
yea i like it too
could be improved, but this is one of ur earliest works!
quite amazing for that.


and ur title does not suck. My titles suck. the recent ones have been song lyrics or titles...

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Harmony of screams...Crescendo of dreams...
:iconloverz116:
aw thanks. :hug:

well, hopefully i will get better in writng poems. *crosses fingers*

haha! maybe i should do that. :)
:iconshadowgriffen:
lol dont worry everyone gets better

and yes, maybe u should :p

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Harmony of screams...Crescendo of dreams...
:iconloverz116:
*still crossing fingers* haha

:nod: oh yes yes yes
:iconseasha:
Beautiful poem. The ending is quite sad. It's a shame someone couldn't save the poor puppet.
:iconloverz116:
:tighthug: thanks so much.

yeah, it is a shame. oh well.
:iconseasha:
You are welcome.

Indeed.

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