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"Was there much pain?"

You don't answer nor do you give
me a sign that you heard me. I
know you're hiding in there; your
little safe haven you created where
no one can hurt you again. I wish I
could follow you there.

He informed me you may never
wake up but I don't listen; all I
listen to is your heart beat.

-

"What did they do to you?"

I'm horrified of my curiosity but I
don't want you to leave out any
details of the glory and the gnarly.
I want to know what they put you
through. I want to put your tears
into my jar and smooth your new
scars with love and make up for the
months we have lost.

I want to tell you for those six months
you were gone; you were not left
alone in my heart.

-

"Why are you still not here?"

You are safe now; they can't hurt you
or make you beg for mercy or carve their
names into your flesh or give you false
hope or. I need you to wake up for us.
I finally have you within my reach and
yet I'm still lost.

I hope you know I'm here now, but maybe
you can't open your eyes cause they
swallowed your sparkle of life with death.

-

I think I'll never forget this moment;
you woke up like a Sleeping Beauty
and somehow I'm the prince waiting
to take you home. Now I know we
will be fine, I'll tape the pieces of you
together like a puzzle.

I think it will be a long time till I erase
the sound of your cries from my mind
when I asked you:

"Was there much pain?"
spur of the moment thing.
not sure how i feel about this.
and this is 'was there much pain?'

TITLE HELP please?

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storyofmylife054's avatar
Hmm I actually really enjoyed the piece :D
I'm not nuts about the beginning, I wish I could elaborate on that, I'll try to once I get some sleep, but it's a very good piece overall.